The Process

Full Manuscript Developmental Edit

A full manuscript edit is designed for writers who want a rigorous, professional read and clear next steps. I work with manuscripts at any stage of the writing process, though many writers come to me after extensive revision or workshop experience, when the project needs an industry-informed read before its next phase.

1) Intake and goals
We begin with a brief exchange about where you are in the process and what you want from the edit. If there are particular concerns (structure, pacing, character, voice, stakes, clarity, category, proposal positioning), I tailor the read accordingly.

2) Full read with page notes
I read the full manuscript (typically up to around 300 pages) and provide detailed page notes throughout. These notes address craft issues and revision opportunities, and just as importantly, they highlight what is already working well — moments of strength in voice, characterization, structure, or tension that should be protected and built upon.

3) Editorial letter and revision roadmap
You’ll receive a comprehensive editorial letter, typically 10–15 pages, that balances honest critique with a clear articulation of the manuscript’s strengths. The letter addresses:

  • what is working at a deep level and why

  • narrative structure and pacing

  • character development and emotional movement

  • voice, tone, and point of view

  • tension, stakes, and momentum

  • clarity of intention: what the book is trying to be and how to bring that forward

  • a prioritized revision roadmap, so you know where to begin and how to proceed

4) Market and submission perspective
Drawing on my ongoing work as a literary agent, I also offer guidance on market readiness and positioning, including:

  • potential comp titles

  • the kinds of agents, editors, or imprints that may be a good fit

  • what may strengthen the manuscript and materials prior to submission

5) Query letter consultation
Query letter consultation is included. This may involve refining an existing query or developing a new one, with close attention to positioning, clarity, and alignment with the manuscript.

6) Consultation
We’ll meet by Zoom or phone for up to two hours, structured in whatever way is most useful to you. Writers often use this time to talk through the editorial letter, discuss revision strategies, work through sticking points, and clarify next steps.